Thursday, February 3, 2011

PROJECT ONE - DRAFT 2

12 comments:

  1. haha. cute mouse. i think you definitely created depth with the patterns and the gradients in the back of the patterns

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  2. I really like your mouse and the pattern in his ears haha. You did a nice job making the paintings go back into the space. Good work so far!

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  3. Honestly, i don't really know about the mouse. I don't want to say that it looks kind of stuck on there, because I know that, in the creation of the project, it actually is, but I worry that it won't look as cohesive as you might want it. But who knows? It still is in progress.

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  4. I think the addition of the mouse was a great idea, it makes a boring space more interesting and the patterns are all great. Curious to see what you do with the mouse's body.

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  5. definitely flatting the space of the floor with that pattern.

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  6. i love how the patterns are effecting the paintings on the right side. awesome pattern on the floor. great job!

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  7. I still think the main issue is how low the mouse is. The soft gradients are working great though, esp. on the walls.

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  8. haha. I love the little mouse, hes really cute. The layout of the image overall is interesting. I would consider making the pattern that you used for the floor smaller. I feel like it is such a large area with such a large pattern and it takes away from the focus of the rest of the image.

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  9. nice depth created with the patterns.

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  10. I really like how you went about doing the perspective of the floor. I think it looks really good so far

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  11. i really like the composition and the idea behind it, but playing with the perspective and distortion of the floor-pattern would make it a little more believable.

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